My dad? Oh, Lord he
was funny. He was a funny, funny
man. To me, he was a hero. I can’t find words to describe how great he
was. Everything I know is from me dad. He was a person for life and love. You’d never see the man not smiling. He was the best man in the world for me. I was never hungry one day or go without a
pair of shoes. My granny, she own a restaurant
and her fridge was always full of food. Dad
was an undertaker. A happy
undertaker. He would work seven days a
week to make sure all of us kids had things.
My dad lived with his wife but I seen my dad every day. But he was a bit of a Jack the Lad as they
say. There were twelve of us. Me, Denise and Sandra had the same mum and
dad, then he had three with one lady, two with another and then one, one, one
and one. His wife didn’t have no kids
with him. It was only kids with the
other ladies. I don’t think he planned
to have all those kids, it’s just the type of man he was. My Gran would say ‘Sonny. You have too much kids. Don’t have no more’ but each new one come
along granny loved them. And my dad
loved them all. He loved all the women
too. He was a good looking, sharp
dressed man. He was a peacock and drew
women to him. All of the women, the
mothers, get on. It was just his wife
and them not get on. Him and his wife they
do argue as well. There is no
relationship gonna be perfect but he done a lot of cheating and she was never
happy with that. I’m not gonna comment
on their relationship because you can have a man cheat on a woman many times
and the woman still forgive the man. But
she didn’t. She killed him.
He passed away eight years ago. He
was seventy three. He had cirrhosis of
the liver. My father never drank but his
wife for years she was putting things in his meal so she could try to keep him so
he wouldn’t go to nobody else and keep him from making more babies with other
ladies. But over the years she was doing
that it started destroying his liver. He
was full of toxins when he died. He was
still smartly dressed and always had a smile on his face though. Even in his last days he had a smile for us kids
and a smile for the ladies.
Wednesday 17 July 2013
Sonny
I grew up in
Jamaica. I came here when I was
eighteen. I was brought up by my
Grandmother; my dad’s mum. My mum was around
but was mostly in what you would call the mental hospital. She was never really capable. My Granny take the stress off her and take
the responsibility off me mum. I’ve only
known me mum that way. She had a time
when she go up. She have a time when she
go down. I’d see her every school holiday. She lived in the rural area and we lived in
the city; Kingston. She was in the rural
side of Jamaica.
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I loved this little tale. I tried to work out if the narrator was male or female, but decided female because of the hero worship of her father. I liked the contrast between that and the ambivalence towards her absent mother, despite the fact that neither of them were ideal parents.
ReplyDeleteLovely characterisation of Sonny. I liked him, despite his failings (glad he wasn't my husband!)and the attraction people felt towards him came through really well. I like the idea of a happy undertaker (I had an uncle like that).
I liked that it was written in dialect. It's not always easy to read in dialect, but this piece was, and it gave depth to it all.
Sharon
I absolutely loved this. Could have read a whole book of it. The (cod) psychologist in me is always fascinated by unreliable narrators, which children almost always are. The way you can piece together all the clues, and sometimes it's not until afterwards that some of them hit you. My favourite line – and perhaps the most telling one of them all – was 'then he had three with one lady, two with another and then one, one, one and one.' Such a poignant illustration of a man unravelling. Clever use of the peacock theme – and probably my favourite piece you have written so far. A++ BG
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